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Wet Sponges

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"Come on!"
"No!"
"You said you'd help!"
"No, I never said that"
"Yes you did!"
"Come on"
"No!"
"Please?  We need help!"
"Read my lips, n-o"
"You said you would help!"
"You imagined me saying I would!"
"No!"
"Yes!"
Kari turns around, "I'll solve this,"
Splat!
A wet sponge hits me in the face
Pearls of water shead from my face
"Now help us was cars"
This is for YWP and the prompt Splat!
Enjoy!
Critique would be nice!
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mspadfoot2's avatar
I really like it. Of course, it's almost more poetry than prose, but still prose. I really like how you chose to do it all in dialogue. I can't do dialogue. I always tend to have very little in my writing.

It's very funny.